Sunday, March 7, 2010

Sunday Scribblings - Fluent

Here is this weeks Sunday Scribblings.  To see more of my work go to My Sunday Scribblings

In dreams I dance,
spinning effortlessly across the flour,
my soft dress fluently swirling
around me to the rhythm of the music.
Moving gracefully, lightly,
unencumbered by age and circumstance.
In dreams, I still dance.

copyright March 07, 2010 ajj


Stan Ski said...

I can do lots of things in dreams I've never been able to do in life.

Americanising Desi said...

in reality you fluently elaborate :D

Frantic Fluency

TJ said...

i watch that every day with my daughter. lovely poem.

keiths ramblings said...

Dancing - I remember doing that! Nice piece.

Dee Martin said...

to dance without arthritic feet - that would be a dream. I DO remember :)

Donna said...

Nice Miz NitaJo!!!

Nita Jo said...

I finally got around to reading my comments. Thanks to all of you! I really appreciate the feedback. I love writing so much, but I just don't spend enough time doing it. Hopefully, I'll be back at Sunday Scribblings this weekend! It's such a great motivator!